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01-09-2008 10:14 AM ET (US)
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now caught up and also asked a couple of writer friends to read ur story.
i think this is very heart felt story, you have good writing skills and I'm impressed but u miss out on typos, I'm dyslexic so i pick up on that, typos on here i don't worry about.
your story touched my heart and i will probably re read it as i prefer fantasy/sci-fi
u may get a note from Papa Mike (Miguel Sanchez) he is a prolific author on nifty so u can look @ his writing style he may not help but im sure he knows some1 that can
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