sorry bout several messages but when i like a story i like to try to make comments of praise and ur story has me hooked and also explain where i have got to and help out with my comments to try to explain also if i like a story it goes 1st through my brain then to my heart n soul then to comments or a reply to author/reply room most r on yahoo so this 1 is new to me lol

please continue and i hope u find a good co-writer

luv n best wishes AlexF

now caught up and also asked a couple of writer friends to read ur story.

i think this is very heart felt story, you have good writing skills and I'm impressed but u miss out on typos, I'm dyslexic so i pick up on that, typos on here i don't worry about.

your story touched my heart and i will probably re read it as i prefer fantasy/sci-fi

u may get a note from Papa Mike (Miguel Sanchez) he is a prolific author on nifty so u can look @ his writing style he may not help but im sure he knows some1 that can

Just thought to drop a line, hoping that your classes are going well. ^^

So any news on the story? Were you able to find someone to help out?

Edited by author 07-21-2008 02:38 AM
Alright, are these guys based in Atlanta? I only ask because I am from Atlanta and I was trying to get an idea where some of these setting were.

Nice story. Keep it up man.

One of the best stories on nifty. This is the 2nd time I'm reading Symbiota and the first time for the Dark chapters. All the best to you.

I think I'm about to be sad.

Is this really it, Dean? Have we lost you? It looks like it's been a year since DL Chapter 5, and just as I'm about to get the gearing turning again on LCoA, I was hoping you were still burning the midnight oil on SSDL.

Let us know what's up, ne? ^^;;

Hey Mychyl,�A;&#A0;&#A0;&#A0; I was (happily) surprised to see a message in this subject, which has been (sniff) quiet for an awfully long time.&#A0; I had figured that Dean may have been swamped by law school.&#A0; It tends to do that, or so I understand.&#A0; Anyway, maybe we can tease-prod-plead-beg-(verb of your choice) Dean into starting things up again.�A;&#A0;&#A0;&#A0;&#A0; And for gods' sake, don't give up on LCoA!&#A0; It's the only place I can get my fix, since DL has gone on hiatus.�A;�A;�A;�A;�A;________________________________�A;From: QuickTopic daily digest <qtopic-37-ByAugWjE5Aa@quicktopic.com>�A;To: davebongard@prodigy.net�A;Sent: Thursday, January 29, 2009 12:18:17 AM�A;Subject: Symbiota Sapiens�A;�A;--QT-------------------------------------------------------------�A;&#A0; &#A0; &#A0; Messages for the topic "Symbiota Sapiens" for 01-28-2009.�A;&#A0; &#A0; &#A0; Reply by email or visit�A;&#A0; &#A0; &#A0; http://www.quicktopic.com/37/H/ByAugWjE5Aa�A;&#A0; &#A0; &#A0; �A;--------------------------------------------------------------- -�A;�A;From: Mychyl&#A0; Time: 03:55 AM�A;I think I'm about to be sad.�A;�A;Is this really it, Dean? Have we lost you? It looks like it's�A;been a year since DL Chapter 5, and just as I'm about to get the�A;gearing turning again on LCoA, I was hoping you were still�A;burning the midnight oil on SSDL.�A;�A;Let us know what's up, ne? ^^;;�A;------------------------------------------------------------�A;_________________________________________________________________�A;To unsubscribe: http://www.quicktopic.com/37/X/ByAugWjE5Aa�A;Start your own topic in 20 seconds: http://www.quicktopic.com |QT�A;

What can I say, I've been out of the loop for quite a while, myself. (Not for so grandiose a reason as our Favored Author, to be sure, but nonetheless...)

I got chapter (9, I think) posted a couple nights ago, and will be back on a once-weekly. But when it comes to the real story behind the Guardians and so on... we need our Dean back for that <3

Loved Symbiota Sapiens, expressing how much so would require too many "really"s. But I think you get the idea.

Dean! We miss you. ; ;

About the best story I've come across on Nifty (well, the best story I've come across on that site when searching for reading material). A bit of a shame that you've been so busy; I really would've liked reading further on Dark Legacy.

Friends, I have finished law school, so I hope to start writing again soon. I still have to study for the bar, find a job (and start working), and I'm gearing up to pop the question to my boyfriend, so I won't be able to crank out the chapters like I did when I was a single undergrad.

Also, I'll be splitting my writing time between this sequel and a sequel to my Harry Potter fanfic "Escribamens", which can be found on HPFandom.net

Talk to you soon.

Yippee, yippe hooray!&#A0; (ahem).&#A0; Well it's good to hear from you, and congratulations on graduating law school.�A;My sincere best wishes on the other stuff, too (ba examr, boyfriend, and all that).&#A0; And we will be very glad when we get to see another chapter.�A;�A;�A;�A;�A;________________________________�A;From: QuickTopic daily digest <qtopic-37-ByAugWjE5Aa@quicktopic.com>�A;To: davebongard@prodigy.net�A;Sent: Tuesday, May 12, 2009 12:14:47 AM�A;Subject: Symbiota Sapiens�A;�A;--QT-------------------------------------------------------------�A;&#A0; &#A0; &#A0; Messages for the topic "Symbiota Sapiens" for 05-11-2009.�A;&#A0; &#A0; &#A0; Reply by email or visit�A;&#A0; &#A0; &#A0; http://www.quicktopic.com/37/H/ByAugWjE5Aa�A;&#A0; &#A0; &#A0; �A;--------------------------------------------------------------- -�A;�A;From: Dean&#A0; Time: 10:58 AM�A;Friends, I have finished law school, so I hope to start writing�A;again soon. I still have to study for the bar, find a job (and�A;start working), and I'm gearing up to pop the question to my�A;boyfriend, so I won't be able to crank out the chapters like I�A;did when I was a single undergrad.�A;�A;Also, I'll be splitting my writing time between this sequel and�A;a sequel to my Harry Potter fanfic "Escribamens", which can be�A;found on HPFandom.net�A;�A;Talk to you soon.�A;------------------------------------------------------------�A;_________________________________________________________________�A;To unsubscribe: http://www.quicktopic.com/37/X/ByAugWjE5Aa�A;Start your own topic in 20 seconds: http://www.quicktopic.com |QT�A;

Congrats on school, and hopefully the bf. ^^
Good to hear things are going well.

Hello? I love your story, mate!