Hi There
My first impressions - 1) The first page is impressive but leaves you wondering if its broken, you have to venture and click on the logo to proceed! I wonder why?
2) Its too wordy. You are an Art company, so I wanted to see pictures, lots of them, but I had to scan all the little phrases and page titles to find one with pictures, and when it opened wow!! If only I could have seen that first.
I speak from experience as an antique & fine art dealer. I set up my site copying ideas from some of the more 'up market' dealers sites, I also had loads of visitors & no sales.
I was lucky enough to get business bricks feedback, altered my site and now I'm getting orders.
Sumary - Cut the words & display the pictures - just as you would in a gallery. Also words to be more 'chatty'.
I hope all goes well.
www.antiqueswestmalling.co.uk