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Andariel  120
08-20-2009 06:14 PM ET (US)
Bleed by Andariel

                                Bleed

 "Mary!" a voice called. "What do you think your doing?"
 "Leaving; I am tired of all your anger and hate, this is no place to raise our child" Mary yelled. She was 8 months pregnant.
 "Mary, you better get your ass back here you ungrateful bitch" the man yelled.
 Mary got into her car and drove away. She kept driving till night then her car broke down. This is where the beginning of the end started........ She went in to labor, but something was going wrong there was blood and allot of it. She got out of the car and started screaming for help.
 "HELP ME" She screamed. She looked around and noticed that there were no houses that she could see and no cars coming. She was starting to lose hope, and then she saw a group of people dressed in black walking towards her. "Help......." she gasped.
 One of the men in the group walked up to Mary and said. "We can save your child but you will die"
 "I don't care just save my baby." Mary managed to say.
 "She will grow up in a world that is far more different than the one you know." the man said.
 "She........It's a girl........Please just save her... save Jessica...." Mary said hope entering her distraught voice.
 "Very well then." the man said. Vampiric fangs grew from his mouth and he went towards her neck; at the sight of them Mary fainted.
 Mary awoke in the middle of a forest. She noticed a shadowy figure and started to move towards it. "Who are you?" she asked it. "And where am I?"
 "I am Lyc and you are walking with me in the World of Dreams." The figure said still not moving.
 "Your a wolf!" She said as she moved closer to it.
 Yes I am. I am here to tell you that your daughter will be raised as a vampire and one day she will meet a Lycan. Together they will lead a Clan of Lycans and Vampires, to bring peace to this chaotic world." Lyc paused. "Now it is time for you to die."
 Mary's body started to glow and she was lifted into the air, then she vanished.
 In the real world.....
 "Is it done Caine?" a woman from the group asked.
 "Yes. We should leave the smell of her blood will bring unwanted attention" Caine said as he looked down at Mary's bloody body.
 "What will the girls name be?" the woman asked.
 "You heard the woman...... This girl's name will be Jessica"
 
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