First of all I did enjoy writing this paper because it forced me to see myself and write in a different fashion. However, I must be honest and say this is probably is a paper that really lacks clarity in its explanation so I hope with class time I can recieve helpful hints as to how to express my thoughts in a more coherent fashion. I am hoping by the end of the semester when the final draft of this paper is due to kinda of combine some of my thoughts into more of a journal or diary form. In other words, my goal for this paper was to write with my readers' knowledge of some of the aspects of my topic but explain my thoughts in a way that I was writing in first person and they were picking up various excerpts from a journal entry that I had written from a few years back. So hopefully I will get this accomplished!