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| Jaylee
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07-22-2006 03:23 AM ET (US)
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| mornikay
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08-27-2003 07:31 PM ET (US)
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I don't know if you read old comments or not, but since you were so gracious about the "admonish" thing, I figured I should weigh in on this one too.
I liked the wasp story a lot. I wrote something very similar in my own blog recently, about a wasp that overpowered a spider that was trying to eat it.
The one small thing I would change, if I were you, is to lose the word "irruption." It is a sophomore mistake to use a 50-cent word where a 10-cent one will do. Especially in this case, since it's the only 50-cent word in the piece, so it looks out of place. I got jolted out of the story at that point, and that's the last thing you want.
In general, use the shortest, plainest word you can think of that will do the job. Otherwise it looks like you're trying to show off and call attention to what a great writer you are. All your attention should instead be focused on the subject at hand.
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08-25-2003 11:44 PM ET (US)
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Yay! Miss Emily finally commented!
Now, that wasn't so very hard, was it?
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| Emily
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08-25-2003 05:34 PM ET (US)
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girl, I freaked out just reading that. There is no way I would of been outside to watch that! Once it flew by I would of already been inside!
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| eeksypeeksy
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08-22-2003 11:08 AM ET (US)
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Yikes!
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| ambiguo
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08-21-2003 02:51 PM ET (US)
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Whoo Typepad! Can't wait. On an insect slant, I was biking the other day, felt something on my shoulder. I turned and saw a cicada as big as my thumb (something like this). Shocked the hell out of me - I'm not afraid of insects, but when there's a big black motherfucker sitting there and you don't expect it, well, things can get a little crazy.
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| Ariel
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08-21-2003 02:50 PM ET (US)
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$30 for typepad? But...the first month is free! Get your ass over there, girl! I can't take this ugly reverse-ordered QuickTopic commenting thang any longer! Besides: if you whined, I bet Anil would give you even more of a discount than the 20% you already got from me. ;)
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08-21-2003 11:31 AM ET (US)
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at least the ads are kind of on topic :)
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| sklero
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08-21-2003 07:06 AM ET (US)
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Tapes: I think the star means you are registered with QuickTopic.
Britt: TypePad. Yes. Pretty.
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08-21-2003 05:19 AM ET (US)
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Edited by author 08-21-2003 05:20 AM
Re: ads
As soon as I can get $30 together I'm for real moving my shit to TypePad. No more ads.
QuickTopic, you were good while you lasted. Sorry, though, you are not just spent, but played out. And now you are ugly.
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| Battletapes
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08-21-2003 03:00 AM ET (US)
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first off... what's with the stars next to some names but not others? is it like if you post a lot or if you're some special person or what? i have star envy. i like space.
secondly... i have roommates who are huge pussies for insects also... right now i have a spider trapped under a cup on my front porch that has been there for like 2 or 3 days. and, i shit you not, it's probably like the size of the top of an aluminum beverage can. it's HUGE!... and completely fantastic. if i were sure it wasn't positive, i'd sit down bare-assed on the concrete, raise the cup, and move it towards my genitals. i'm not a fan of insects either but, i'm telling you, these queers i live with freak out over nothing.... no offense to you circus clowns.
maybe, if it's still there, i'll borrow jay's digital camera and take a picture of the monster on the porch and you can turn this blog into "insect fear: the words"
oh, and for your wasp: that sounds kick ass. sometimes i wish a wasp would pick me up and kill my ass... not cos i want to die but cos wouldn't that be a way to go?
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08-20-2003 11:24 PM ET (US)
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<------- ads!?
anyway... shrimp: seriously, dude. biiiiiiiig wasp. stinging like fucking. hard. but yes, her friends -- they/we are pussies.
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| mikro
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08-20-2003 05:44 PM ET (US)
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I think I saw something like this once, like "what the fuck is that giant alien insect?" and then realising that it was one insect carrying another. Hoooo. I think I'm repressing that memory.
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08-20-2003 04:20 PM ET (US)
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Ha ha, your friends are pussies. Ha ha!
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| boomer
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08-20-2003 03:38 PM ET (US)
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bugs come supersized down south, i am told. cicadas, junebugs, etc ... i'm creeped out by 'em all.
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