This story was wonderful in too many ways, and I'm probably not going to be the first person who's thanked you for writing it.

I liked the way you described the interaction between Harry, Draco and the two children - All of the emotions that should have been there were... So were the thoughts really.

I noticed you think your going to write a better version of this story at some time, I'm not going to be the one to try to stop you, but I can't see any real way to improve it.

Thank you,
          Adamand