I also felt that there was entirely too much detail throughout this novel. Although the detail really allowed the reader to create a vivid picture of the Mulvaneys, in some cases the overuse of detail was not needed. I felt that the beginning third of the book was too slow, and in need of some excitement. I enjoyed getting to understand each family member but it was also very boring. Without the extended background into the family, the reactions to the rape would not have the same understanding, but I felt that more action could be involved in the first third of the novel. But overall I enjoyed this novel. I felt that it was entirely too long and detailed but it offered an interesting storyline. And although the detail was overwhelming the plot devolopment was wonderful.